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Thursday, August 26, 2021

under the bed part 2

 Under the bed part 2


Hi, I’m william, the creator of under the bed part 1, I’m back baby. Anyways I’m back writing under the bed part 2. From where we left off my dad had just left and I was ready to peek under the bed. Let’s get into it.


As I leaned over my bed I wanted to close my eyes tight but I fought the pressure and kept my eyes open. I sat back up in the bed for a bit trying to calm down (by the way it turned into like 10 minutes!) finally I was ready, I started leaning over with my eyes open. I WAS LOOKING UNDER THAT BED. for once I did it. Wait for what? Oh, bummer there’s nothing there, flip. My big chance is gone forever, as that’s what I thought. Three minutes later it went again! I had to get under there now! I quickly threw my head over the edge and saw two massive red eyes! I felt like my body died on me.

I shot back up and decided to never do that again.

I sprinted up the hallway and went to tell my parents what just happened, and they didn’t believe me. They just told me to go back to bed, I did but I was very annoyed with them for not believing me, the thing is, they don’t even come down the hallway to check. Anyways I went back to bed and got in, I gt a bit of sleep but I reckon I had like 5 nightmares because of the eys.


I woke up 7 hours later to go watch tv. Great, first I had whispers now it’s 2 massive red eyes under my bed I have 2 things to deal with. I went to go watch youtube and it was as if anything couldn’t get any worse, my brother jump scared me, wow thanks Archie. Oh by the way my brother’s name is Archie, that’s who I’m talking about. All of me writing this makes me scared so I might stop soon.


I crawled under there with my brain screaming at me to not do it, I was determined to see what it was.


Wow, why was I scared to torches were making the light, old red Christmas decorations were the red part and it was my family who was talking in the lounge that made the noise, what was I scared of, boy I’m such a scaredy-cat. When I realized that is what it was I went back to sleep without any nightmares.


That is it for the under the bed story, I hope you have read both parts, part 1 and part 2. goodbye!


1 comment:

  1. Hi William. I'm glad you carried on with the story and finished it off as I really wanted to know what happened. I'm glad it ended up not being anything to worry about after all. This is a very creative and imaginative piece of writing and I like how your personal voice comes across in the story. I look forward to reading more of your great stories! I particularly like stories like this that keep you wondering! Mrs B

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